Lying in bed hardly sleeping i couldn't wait for what was going to happen next. we had to wake up at 2 am on a Sunday during spring break. i was in for a surprise of a long car ride before a week of pure fun. I was going to Colorado for spring break. except on that Wednesday we were going down and i didn't see a 5 foot drop. all of a sudden a person came out of no where and i tried to turn out of the way. Then i went of the drop and my snowboard stuck in the snow and i started spinning faster and faster seeing darkness then light. and all of a sudden my knee felt like it snapped off with splintering pain i was lying on the ground. It took me about 5 minutes to get up but it felt like hours. Every second gave me more and more pain. Until I maned up and started going down the hill again.
The next day we didn't go out so that we could rest for a day. instead we walked around stores looking for souvenirs. i didn't find any that i wanted to buy. but there are some interesting things that we saw like a giant coca-cola bear. we got some pictures with it.
unfortunately we reached are last day. and we had to pack up for a long car ride ahead. it took another day another boring day in the car after a week of fun. if i could do it again i would just for the car ride.
you used are instead of our last day. I liked how you described the pain in your knee.
ReplyDeleteI like how you described the pain in your knee. Your punctuation could be better.
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