"Hey! move out of the way." i said to my sister.
"Why?" she asked.
"I'm going to drive the van."
"Fine."
Those were the only word i remember before it happened. It was a beautiful day outside. In my two year old mind I was thirty. So i decided to drive my mom and dad's van.
Feeling very proud of myself i got into the front seat on the drivers side and started turning the wheel. then i pulled the lever to put it in nutral, i started rolling backwand still playing with the wheel. Thats all i remember but my mom tells me that i crashed into our white car and totaled it.
One thing i didnt tell my parents was that the next thing i remember is thinking about doing it again, but i didn't. When i think about it right now if i had the choice again it might be different.
That's funny. I think you probably could have used more detail.
ReplyDeleteI thought it was pretty funny, and you could of used more detail when you crashed.
ReplyDeleteI thought it was a really good story. Just add some detail and use punctuation.
ReplyDeleteSounds like you were a crazy toodler.
ReplyDeleteYou need to capitalize your "I".
That was pretty funny, but maybe make it a bit longer.
ReplyDeleteDid you get hurt? Remember to capitalize your I's.
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